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Faust
Lord of Altair


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Age : 24
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

PostSubject: The Dark Watch   Thu Oct 23, 2008 6:32 pm

In midnight's hour, your blood runs cold,
dark things are about.
You watch your back, and soon break down,
and start to scream and shout.
The moon is full, the sky is dark,
on this here Hollows' eve,
And soon upon your sanity,
dark creatures start to feed.
They're closing in, cornering you,
your back against the wall,
but suddenly, here he comes,
a stranger, dark and tall.
His eyes are red, his cloak is dark,
yet he is here to help,
to hold back the barking wolves,
and make them run and yelp.
His blade, it glows, with an eerie light,
its runes, dark and cold,
he lifts it high above his head,
and shouts, defiant and bold.
He charges off, into the night,
and all that you can see,
is glints of steel, and glowing eyes,
and spurts of blood flown free.
The nightmare creatures, once so strong,
have tasted steel so hard,
the stranger comes, and sheaths his blade,
and tells you, "Here's my card."
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Anubis
Shadow Lord


Male Number of posts : 65
Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: The Dark Watch   Tue Oct 28, 2008 10:07 am

I give it a 2 out of 10. sike it was great!!! 20/10 good job.

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Chaos Poet
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Location : Hell
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: The Dark Watch   Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:34 pm

Very good yet again, I think this is my favorite of your posts, it tells a wonderful story.

And Anubis, please check a dictionary, your spelling is terrible, lol.

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Faust
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PostSubject: Re: The Dark Watch   Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:17 pm

Thank you, all.

And Anubis, your spelling is truely atrocious.

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Anubis
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PostSubject: Re: The Dark Watch   Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:01 am

Well Faust Truly you should check your spelling you baboon. :lol:

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