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Chaos Poet
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Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Dancing   Fri Oct 24, 2008 6:36 pm

Damned and damned again,
Living a life of controlling sin,
To dance the dance of decisive revision,
I'll need a partner with whom to spin.

So twirl my life and spin my feet,
Make me move like never before,
Take my hand and take my heart,
And move upon this floor.

Shift the world beneath our feet,
Clean my life of what I was,
Take away the burning decay,
And dance this dance just becuase.

Save my soul from myself,
Control my movements with your own,
Keep the music from ever stopping,
So I'll never live my life alone.

I've loved you from the beginning,
But then I was not who I am,
But when this song started playing,
A new life for me had began.

So move with me and dance away,
Until this party ends,
And no matter what should ever happen,
I will never go back to what I was then.

So twirl my life and spin my feet,
Make me move like never before,
Take my hand and take my heart,
And move with me forevermore.

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Let the fire consume you.


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Faust
Lord of Altair


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Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

PostSubject: Re: Dancing   Fri Oct 24, 2008 6:44 pm

Great poem! Lots of feeling.

... though I can't imagine you dancing. razz

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Chaos Poet
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PostSubject: Re: Dancing   Sat Oct 25, 2008 12:33 pm

It has happened before. And thanks.


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NEX
Echo


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Location : Here
Registration date : 2008-10-25

PostSubject: Re: Dancing   Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:43 pm

very good rite..my favorite on the site
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Anubis
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PostSubject: Re: Dancing   Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:48 am

Just the kind of poem I would expect form you. Keep it up.

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One is captured,
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