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Anubis
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PostSubject: 3 Part poem   Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:07 am

Prelude- Still Human

A warrior stalks through the night
Longing for a formitable fight
The fighting spirit burning red
Countless enimes now lay dead
The blade is drawn
The time is near
Cut his throat
From ear to ear
Rip his heart
From his chest
Do it now
And pass the test
Take his soul
The corpse will burn
For more death
I still will yearn

Now a monster

Eat the flesh
Sweetly seared
Quench your thirist
With fallen tears
Hunt them down
Let none remain
this angered beast
You can not tame
Grab a victim
Hold them tight
One more kill
Will end this night
Hang the meat
Out to dry
For tomorrow
More will die.

Final Thoughts

All it takes
is one creature
named anger
and the world
will be consmed.

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One is captured,
One flies away,
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PostSubject: Re: 3 Part poem   Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:35 am

So this is what we've all been waiting for?

I say it was worth it, man. You using a rhyme scheme though? Unusual, but I like it. And the meanings there too, score one for Anubis.

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Anubis
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PostSubject: Re: 3 Part poem   Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:23 pm

Thank you. I hope the others agree. If you do like please post a reply and let me know.

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Faust
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PostSubject: Re: 3 Part poem   Tue Oct 06, 2009 6:54 pm

Anubis, this sounds like a recolection on the ANBU training test. I love it! Funny how only you and I passed...

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