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NEX
Echo


Female Number of posts : 47
Location : Here
Registration date : 2008-10-25

PostSubject: HIM   Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:10 am

A crature lurks in the midst of night
In many instilling fear and fright
He'll take you to an early grave
Don't be stupid don't be brave
He like a challenge,he likes to play
Fuel his fun run away
He'll get you no matter where you go
And kill you deadly,painfully,and slow
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Faust
Lord of Altair


Male Number of posts : 107
Age : 24
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

PostSubject: Re: HIM   Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:30 am

Not bad. May I ask who you are?

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NEX
Echo


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PostSubject: Re: HIM   Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:41 am

i wont give my name so u may call me nex and u
oh thx..ur poems r very good
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Faust
Lord of Altair


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Age : 24
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

PostSubject: Re: HIM   Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:44 am

Why thank you.

I can appreciate secrecy; it adds to the mystery and makes things more interesting.

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Chaos Poet
Chaos Lord


Male Number of posts : 193
Location : Hell
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: HIM   Sat Oct 25, 2008 12:43 pm

Good poem, very good indeed. Reminds me of my earlier ones I wrote. Very good, keep up the great work, I would like to read more.

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Faust
Lord of Altair


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Age : 24
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

PostSubject: Re: HIM   Mon Oct 27, 2008 8:15 pm

Chaos wrote:
Very goo

Very goo? Very Goo?

VERY GOO?

scratch

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Anubis
Shadow Lord


Male Number of posts : 65
Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: HIM   Tue Oct 28, 2008 10:09 am

I know who you are and I must say this was exceptionally great. I would never see it comming from you. L.O.L.

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One is captured,
One flies away,
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AEMlastingimpression
New Poet


Number of posts : 5
Registration date : 2009-03-02

PostSubject: Re: HIM   Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:04 pm

NICCCE
this is your cousin :]
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