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wildchild13w
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PostSubject: The Morning After   Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:42 pm

Watching the dawn

break over the sky,

holding a mug of coffee

steaming in my hands.

Golden sunshine tints

emerald foliage

as early spring mists

shroud a waking earth.

Breathing in deeply

smell of coffee and chimes

peace fills my insides

like liquid into a glass.

This is the morning after

the rest of my life,

standing at the window

wearing your shirt.
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PostSubject: Re: The Morning After   Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:43 pm

The scene is vivid. I can smell the bitterness, feel the warmth of the sun. This is one of my favorite works.

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wildchild13w
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PostSubject: Re: The Morning After   Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:46 pm

I'm proud of it, myself. Thank you very much.
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