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*Little Emo*
New Poet


Female Number of posts : 1
Age : 21
Location : wv
Registration date : 2008-10-25

PostSubject: Pain   Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:07 pm

I hold my chest
But the pain
Flows through my veins
I clentch my teeth
Trying to hold it back
But the tears do not seize
Happiness stares at me
Laughing in my face
I stare at happiness
But there is no trace
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Faust
Lord of Altair


Male Number of posts : 107
Age : 24
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

PostSubject: Re: Pain   Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:17 pm

Not bad, sis. With some practice, you'll be a great poet. Smile

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Life's a road with many turns,
to make it through you first get burns,
cuts and scratches, thrusts of steel,
but through the pains true life yo feel.
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Anubis
Shadow Lord


Male Number of posts : 65
Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Welcome   Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:44 am

Not bad. Good use of emotion. Learn to tap into it and utilize all that is around you.

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One is captured,
One flies away,
the one that is left becomes a hero.
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