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Anubis
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PostSubject: A summer’s Breeze   Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:40 am

A summer’s breeze passes my face
I surround myself with bliss
I am happy
Butterflies fill my stomach
This place calms my soul
As I think back all
Bad times go away
Happy memories flood me
I try to enjoy this moment
Before it is gone
It lasts only for a few short
Moments, but I completely absorb
The feelings
I almost feel human.

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One is captured,
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Faust
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PostSubject: Re: A summer’s Breeze   Tue Oct 28, 2008 1:21 pm

Almost.

Good poem.

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