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PostSubject: Chaos Intertwined   Sun Nov 02, 2008 1:19 pm

Do not post on this until it is complete.

This is going to be a very interesting poem. It is a duet poem, by myself and NEX, each from the others point of view. Darkened Heart and Broken Soul, brought together in a script of corruption cleansed and pains healed.
This...Is the tale of Chaos Intertwined.

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Sun Nov 02, 2008 1:26 pm

Another person, another scum,
Though this one may seem to be more fun,
Becuase as he walks upon this ground,
He seems haunted by what he's done.

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Sun Nov 02, 2008 6:25 pm

A girl quite different, not like others,
I see a few marks, oh just a cutter,
That can't be all..I feel more,
She brings emotions something soft and warm.
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Sun Nov 02, 2008 6:37 pm

I've heard him speak, so angry and evil,
But something lies beneath this crusted exterior,
Maybe it is time to find out what,
But then again, maybe I'll accidentally make him fear?

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Sun Nov 02, 2008 7:34 pm

Her words are quite deffinently unheard,
But I listen to her every word.
Why for her do I care?
Lets see how, in my life, she can fare.
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:04 pm

A step too close, a step too far,
But I just can't stop, not from there.
I need to know, I need to see,
Even if a new wound it would tear.

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:45 pm

Easy to get to know she is not,
She's a disease I've now caught.
Let me learn of who she is,
Who cares of the consequences.

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If love exists; I will fall

~Aiden~
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:05 pm

He speaks in toungues unknown to me,
Of things he sees differently.
These secrets he tells of dark things,
That shows what he can really be.

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:17 pm

Unfrightened by what I say,
Ones mind which wonders free.
A spirit unable to be tame,
Already its more than just a fun game.

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~Aiden~
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:22 pm

What could come of this, I want to know,
And here it comes, another try.
This path I follow tears my heart,
Split now for these guys.
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:47 pm

I should've stopped it then and there,
Never meant for two hearts to tear.
I see this look in her eyes,
How could she feel that for this guy?

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~Aiden~
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:52 pm

Turmoil and tear, wear and more wear,
I don't blame either for my own blame,
But they each fault themselves,
And each seems to feel the same.

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Mon Nov 03, 2008 9:12 pm

A dark shadow is cast upon us three,
What's this? He let her emotion free!
What's this saddening look upon her face?
All that pain looks out of place.

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~Aiden~
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:24 am

A choice premade, out of grasp,
He's made the decision already.
Sent me away with exacting words,
Now who will be here to keep me steady?

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Tue Nov 04, 2008 3:21 pm

All that pain in those beautiful eyes,
Could I help her mend her wounded soul?
Could helping her's also help mine?
Lets try and make two hearts whole.

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~Aiden~
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Wed Nov 05, 2008 7:02 pm

And so it seems the story had come to a close,
A tale of two broken souls and bleeding hearts.
But the tale has only just begun for those involved,
As for every ending, there must be something that starts.

That something, this time,
was Love.
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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Wed Nov 05, 2008 9:36 pm

Truly, sincerely, beautiful. A duet of two souls entangled. Amazing.

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Wed Dec 03, 2008 7:10 pm

I just realized, after all this time, Entertwined is spelled Intertwined.

Damn.

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Fri Dec 05, 2008 11:53 pm

razz I'm a weiner!




Edited by: Chaos Poet for grammatical correction, JERK!

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PostSubject: Re: Chaos Intertwined   Wed Dec 10, 2008 12:42 pm

The purity of your two souls is amazing. Both with a shaky past, now finding each other in this "paradice". The Eternal love can not only be seen but felt by all of those around. My heart swells with joy, but at the sametime aches with the dismal of my lonelyness.

Listen closely and you will hear
The lovers that saved me from my fear.

You both have my blessings.

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One is captured,
One flies away,
the one that is left becomes a hero.
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