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Faust
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PostSubject: Bittersweet Victory   Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:38 pm

Steady your helm, for the enemy is nigh upon us.

Can you not sense the tension in the air?

Yes, the Death now approaching is inevitable, but glory shall be ours.

Carpe Diem, Seize the day!

For Death is but a passage, an entrance to the hall of champions.

We will all travel beyond this mortal plane, so do it now, with me as a comrade, Fight and die as a Hero, no to be known as a coward.

For those who fight by the sword shall die by it, and a warriors with spirits of fire, I lift my blade and cry to the heavens " Victory, thou art mine! To be found in death, for as I cross over into the realm of twilight, I take the souls of my enemies with me, as a trophy to the battle which hath delivered me there.”

-for victory is mine.

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PostSubject: Re: Bittersweet Victory   Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:30 pm

Though I am not sure this counts as a poem, its a good post nonetheless, and tells the emotion fairly.

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Faust
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PostSubject: Re: Bittersweet Victory   Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:14 pm

Actually, this is an old prose story from Fireside. Luckily, I saved this one on my computer. Kinda old, though...

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PostSubject: Re: Bittersweet Victory   Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:08 am

im not sure what to say. Good body, but it is more like an old english folk tale. Kinda like Beowolf. Not bad. Maybe we should add a story section.

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