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Faust
Lord of Altair


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Age : 24
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

PostSubject: Devotion   Mon Nov 03, 2008 10:22 pm

My life, before, I cannot see,
It began anew when you joined me.
Behind a shroud, my past it lies,
Covered now by joyous cries.

Your perfect face, your velvet voice,
I'm filled with joy, that I'm your choice.
The feelings I have felt for you,
trounce everything I thought I knew.

My love, my sweet, my future bride,
to hold you tight fills me with pride.
I'll keep you safe with these two arms,
I swear that you'll come to no harm.

For strength, your love, it fills me through,
I'd give my life to protect you.
I'll bring you joy with all my heart,
for all eternity, we shall not part.

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Life's a road with many turns,
to make it through you first get burns,
cuts and scratches, thrusts of steel,
but through the pains true life yo feel.
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Chaos Poet
Chaos Lord


Male Number of posts : 193
Location : Hell
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: Devotion   Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:25 pm

It seems, in the end, with both got our new beginnings, eh, my friend? Very good write, it tells a tale of a heart cleansed.

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Faust
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PostSubject: Re: Devotion   Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:11 pm

Thank you, my friend. True love can cleanse the deepest stains.

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Anubis
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Male Number of posts : 65
Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: Devotion   Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:04 am

Suck it up!!!!! It is a great write but don't get too soft on me.

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One is captured,
One flies away,
the one that is left becomes a hero.
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