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Anubis
Shadow Lord


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Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Forever with love   Wed Nov 12, 2008 12:56 pm

Each time you smile at me
the butterflies in my stomach fly.
My heart begins to beat faster.
Wounderful visions fill my head.
I sit back and hope
for the moment when our lips meet.
Just thinking about it
a fire begins.
Love over whelms my being.
I love you can't express my feelings for you.
All that I truly want
is to hold you in my arms,
Forever with love.

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One is captured,
One flies away,
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Faust
Lord of Altair


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Age : 24
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

PostSubject: Re: Forever with love   Wed Nov 12, 2008 10:08 pm

Not bad. Try a little more emotion.

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to make it through you first get burns,
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