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Anubis
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PostSubject: Mother Earth   Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:18 pm

10,000 years I have watched

Mankind has soficated the earth.

Now as she chokes I listen,

waiting for the time that I can awaken.

I shall free this choke hold and let her breath in fresh air,

I shall help release her built up rage.

All that man has worked for shall fall.

I only hope that I can save her,

or we all shall see the sleeping beast.

Her heart of fire will engulf all,

then there will be nothing but scilence.

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PostSubject: Re: Mother Earth   Thu Oct 23, 2008 7:01 pm

Not bad, but a total lack of ryme. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Mother Earth   Thu Oct 23, 2008 7:16 pm

Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, as long as the emotion comes through.

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