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Anubis
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PostSubject: Why?   Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:43 am

I've tried to stop loving her,
But iIcan not.
When I see her my heart races.
I can not understand this.
What makes her special?
Her looks?
There are more beauitful.
Her personality?
There are others with the same.
Why can I not look at her
like all the other girls?
Can anyone help me, for I do not understand?

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Chaos Poet
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Location : Hell
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: Why?   Wed Jan 07, 2009 7:50 pm

I can't help with your problem, but I can with your spelling. Nice post, man, but not one of your best.

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