3 Part poem

Anubis · Subject: 3 Part poem Thu Sep 03, 2009 6:07 pm

Prelude- Still Human

A warrior stalks through the night
Longing for a formitable fight
The fighting spirit burning red
Countless enimes now lay dead
The blade is drawn
The time is near
Cut his throat
From ear to ear
Rip his heart
From his chest
Do it now
And pass the test
Take his soul
The corpse will burn
For more death
I still will yearn

Now a monster

Eat the flesh
Sweetly seared
Quench your thirist
With fallen tears
Hunt them down
Let none remain
this angered beast
You can not tame
Grab a victim
Hold them tight
One more kill
Will end this night
Hang the meat
Out to dry
For tomorrow
More will die.

Final Thoughts

All it takes
is one creature
named anger
and the world
will be consmed.

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Three friends go into battle
One is captured,
One flies away,
the one that is left becomes a hero.

Chaos Poet · Subject: Re: 3 Part poem Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:35 am

So this is what we've all been waiting for?

I say it was worth it, man. You using a rhyme scheme though? Unusual, but I like it. And the meanings there too, score one for Anubis.

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I am the shadow of night at the break of dawn.
I am the burning of fire surrounded by nightfall.
I am the moon's glow in infinite shadow.
I am your fear and your synn and you salvation.
I am the Chaos Lord.

Anubis · Subject: Re: 3 Part poem Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:23 am

Thank you. I hope the others agree. If you do like please post a reply and let me know.

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Three friends go into battle
One is captured,
One flies away,
the one that is left becomes a hero.

Faust · Subject: Re: 3 Part poem Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:54 am

Anubis, this sounds like a recolection on the ANBU training test. I love it! Funny how only you and I passed...

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Life's a road with many turns,
to make it through you first get burns,
cuts and scratches, thrusts of steel,
but through the pains true life yo feel.